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[Unlucky # 12 {DEMO}]

Cool

It can be a nice song if you match up the melody and the kicks together
It's like you are playing a melody and mix it with the kicks of other songs

Sblounchked responds:

ok thanks for the tip.

-Ed

[Citrus Quenches my Thirst]

Good

Melody needs more work, i think both of the melody are not really match up together
But i think the sound of the melody was not bad

FearlessKon responds:

That's what i was thinking and i didnt really put in a transition. but i like the first melody, This was a quick project to show off some new sounds ive been working on

[<TeK> Reforia (Demo)]

great

I think the intro is good, but at the beginning of the song i think it can do more of it instead of just letting pads to go on
Cant wait to listen to full version keep it up

TeKNeTiC responds:

Yeah, having a sweet drum beat or something at the beginning could definitely help it.

Thanks for the review.

[[Fiji]Quick Hellos-WIP!]

Perfect~~

I think the problem is on the piano part,
middle part of the songs you played 2 piano, i think it's a bit confusing when both piano plays at the same time with a same pitch.
But great job buddy!

MrFijiWiji responds:

maybe ill bring up the melody to a higher octave... thnx for the review!

[-[SR]-Time]

Nice

I think if you add some pads or strings it will be more better, but it's a great job since you made something reali quick

skeletor592 responds:

Thanks, ill add more strings to it, i know it could do better

[Interplanetary Medium]

Not bad

I think it's pretty good since the melody and the kicks are nice
but one thing i just wanna say is at the end your melody fades out too quickly, it's like.....the pattern suddenly disappear

jxl180 responds:

Can you please PM me and tell me how the ending can be improved? I would greatly appreciate it.

Thank you,
Jxl180

[[CS] The WiP]

Good job

Nice hard trance!
a bit techno feel? O.o
I like it when u use the snares to fill in and when to the kicks with melody!
BOOM BOOM BOOM!

Unrl responds:

thanks mate! =)

[-F- Windswept]

Cool

I reali love the piano!
but i think the lead of the melody can be better,
the bass is good that it was simple

fergyanimated responds:

Thanks!
Yeah, i didnt really think much over this one, I just wanted to try out a trance song. For jokes! It didnt turn out that bad though, so i thought i may aswell submit it.

[Sunset Trance (WIP2)]

Not a bad start

Add some hats and snare as well it will be a lot better
Add effects into your mixer! Either high cut or a low cut

MightySusway responds:

Thanks, I'll add the percussion in the final version.

[<TeK> Melody 24]

PROO

Nice Melody!
Nice transmssion!
Nice Kicks!
Nice bass!

TeKNeTiC responds:

Thanks man! I worked pretty hard on this one.